marurun wrote:Look, man, this story will never sell unless there’s a princess, or at least some romantic companion. Could there just maybe be a princess at the end and they neck a little before the credits roll?
Nope, no can do. Okay, but how about a compromise. What if, at the end, there's almost a full two minutes of inspirational poetry from Rasputin, praising your achievements? Hold on, wait, I'm really serious about this--.